The #ChickLitLove-fest continues today with participating authors sharing romantic excerpts from their books. In this snippet from my novel, In Need of Therapy, heroine Pilar Alvarez is trying to close the door on an old relationship (Her ex, Victor, just won't take the hint!), and in the process she might be opening a new window . . .
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Humming the tune to some Nicki Minaj song
I didn't know the name of, I headed down the stairs. Just as I reached the landing that divided
the steps before they veered to the left, I heard the muffled sound of my cell
phone ringing. I stopped and unzipped my
purse. Extracting the phone, I checked
the Caller ID. Victor. UGH! There went my good mood. I could have just let the call go to voice
mail, but I was annoyed that my ex was once again intruding on my life and I
suddenly felt confrontational. So, I
answered it.
"To take you out for a romantic dinner at Tantra, mi amor." Tantra was a Miami Beach hot spot that was known for its sensual environment. Its exotic smells, decor, and cuisine were all designed to enhance and arouse the senses, and there were, in fact, several aphrodisiacs on the menu. When a man took a date to Tantra, it was with one goal in mind.
"That's not going to happen. Ever,"
I said firmly.
"But you love Tantra! Don't you remember we went there for our
one-month anniversary? I hand fed you
lobster dipped in bleeding heart truffle vinaigrette and grilled quail with
fresh figs." Mmmmmmm, he was making my mouth water. "Then, we went back to my place and
spent hours experimenting with Kama Su--"
"Victor!" I interrupted him
before his walk down memory lane became X-rated.
"Okay, you don't like Tantra
anymore. I'll take you to
B.E.D." Where patrons ate their
meals while sitting on large mattresses.
A theme seemed to be developing with Victor's restaurant choices.
"I don't want to go to B.E.D. with
you." It sounded like I was turning
down a proposition much more salacious than dinner.
"Alright, you'd rather not commit to
sharing a meal with me. I
understand. We can just take a walk on
the beach and talk."
"We are not a couple anymore, Victor."
In my agitated state, I began to pace back and forth on the
landing. Three steps towards the wall,
pivot, then three steps back to the top of the stairs. "We broke up. And people who are broken up do not spend
time with each other."
"But you said we could still be
friends, and friends spend time with each other."
"Friends give each other space when
they ask for it."
"I've given you plenty of
space."
"Then, why do I feel so claustrophobic?"
I questioned irritably. "You've got
to back off."
In that moment, I actually felt a pang of
sympathy for my former lover. Maybe his
campaign to win me back wasn't all about his over-inflated ego? Maybe he did have real feelings for me?
Softening towards him, I said, "Don't
worry, Victor. It's not like I'm going
to walk out the door tomorrow and run into my soul ma--" I bumped
face-first into a hard, flat surface, let out a startled yelp, and staggered
back against the wall. My cell phone
clattered to the stone floor and I watched dazedly as a leafy green plant
toppled off a large cardboard box being carried by a tall man with a square jaw
and thick brown hair that was attractively disheveled.
"Damn," he cursed and dropped the box down on the pile of potting soil that now covered the landing. It hit the ground with a loud thump. "Sorry. The plant blocked my view and I didn't see you. I shouldn't have tried to carry so much in one trip. Are you okay?"
He had a brusque way of speaking that immediately outed him as a New Yorker. There were plenty of retirees in South Florida who hailed from that part of the country, so I knew the accent well.
"Damn," he cursed and dropped the box down on the pile of potting soil that now covered the landing. It hit the ground with a loud thump. "Sorry. The plant blocked my view and I didn't see you. I shouldn't have tried to carry so much in one trip. Are you okay?"
He had a brusque way of speaking that immediately outed him as a New Yorker. There were plenty of retirees in South Florida who hailed from that part of the country, so I knew the accent well.
I blinked hard a few times, trying to
reorient myself. "I-I think
so."
"What about your head? Did you bang it when you hit the
wall?" There was concern in his
eyes, eyes that were the most brilliant shade of blue I'd ever seen. Gazing into them was almost like staring
directly into the sun; I felt dazed,
woozy, like the back of my head was going to split open and my brain would fall
out . . . okay, so it wasn't the color of this man’s irises that was having
such a strange effect on me, I'd obviously suffered a serious cranial injury.
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Wanna find out who Mr. Square Jaw is? Pick up a copy of In Need of Therapy today; the e-book is only $1.99!
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Book Blurb: Lending a sympathetic ear and dispensing sage words of advice is all part of the job for psychologist Pilar Alvarez, and she’s everything a good therapist should be: warm, compassionate, supportive. She listens, she cares, and she has all the answers, but how’s the woman everyone turns to in their hour of need supposed to cope when her own life starts to fall apart?
While working hard to make a success of her recently-opened practice in trendy South Beach, Pilar must also find time to cater to the demands of her boisterous Cuban family, which includes younger sister Izzy, an unemployed, navel-pierced wild child who can't stay out of trouble, and their mother, a beauty queen turned drama queen who’s equally obsessed with her fading looks and getting Pilar married before it’s “too late.” Although she’d like to oblige her mother and make a permanent love connection, Pilar’s romantic prospects look grim. Her cheating ex, who swears that he’s reformed, is stalking her. A hunky, but strictly off-limits, patient with bad-boy appeal and intimacy issues is making passes. And the sexy shrink in the suite across the hall has a gold band on his left ring finger.
When a series of personal and professional disasters lead Pilar into the arms of one of her unsuitable suitors, she's left shaken, confused, and full of self-doubt. With time running out, she must make sense of her feelings and learn to trust herself again so that she can save her business, her family, and most importantly, her heart.
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Great excerpt and a nice tease! :-) I keep writing stuff then deleting it because I don't want to spoil the journey to come for Pilar. LOL
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